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Tuesday, July 04, 2006

Also disgusting...

A "young offender" suspect in Creba murder isout on bail. Disgusting.

h/t Backseat Blogger

1 Comments:

  • At Wed. Jul. 05, 12:35:00 a.m. EDT, Blogger Dirk said…

    I just read the piece you're talking about, and I think you're making a big fuss over nothing. The piece is fine. In no way does the murder suspect come off looking good.

    This line "Spewing profanities at members of the news media as he left court Friday" is a nice one, I think. It captures some of the action as this kid left the court, and shows what kind of a disrespectful creep we're dealing with.

    The bit about the soccer watching plans lets us as readers get into the kid's head. Again, this kid comes off looking like a sick puppy. He's just gotten out on bail for killing someone, and soccer is top-most on his mind?

    And as for the details about his crime being mentioned in the latter section of the article, well, that's how news articles like this are written. New details appear first, and background appears last.

    As far as I'm concerned, this isn't a bad article.

     

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